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meet onica chapter 2 by ~legendary444:iconlegendary444:





onica had finally reached the death room as she slammed the door open she saw her cousin was in fact there  but so was another person onica knew.  "Whitney!!!!" grey yelled running over to his sister. onica ran to help her cousin who had accidentally knocked over a pile of books trapping his sister and him under them. just then someone grabbed onica’s arm she turned around to find her aunts adviser towering over her. "Milady" she said, what is it what do you want Parilla?!!!!! Milady, she said again, "you need to get the little one out id be hard for him". "WHATS THAT SUPPOSED TO MEAN PARILLA?!!!! YOU CAN’T DO THIS!!!! LET HER OUT OF HERE, I COMAND YOU AS THE FUTURE QUEEN!!!!!! "I’m sorry milady you would need permission from a higher ranked being for that to happen". “Fine!! but give us at least a 2 weeks please!!! ill find someone!!!! Just let her stay PLEASE!!!” Alright Milady but only a week. ( onica knew the queen was on a trip leaving Parilla in charge but onica knew even her aunt wouldn’t be able to help since this rule was made centuries ago and  couldent be changed by  most people it would be up to people with higher ranks such as gods and goddesses  and with that Parilla walked out. onica walked over 2 her cousins and cleared the books. Her cousins jumped on her Whitney especially, the two hugged her so tight she couldn’t breath, thanks onica, whimpered Witney.
For the rest of the day the three never left each others side.(Onica knew why the acted so scared the family used to be much larger in fact  originally there was at least 4 more stars, blue star, green star, and black star, and  red (we should all know the reason behind the names by now)(if you ask why they named black star black star its like this hes actually the 2end oldest but after the others came to be he just took his nickname so as to not be left out)  
Green was the oldest of the stars she didnt turn aginst the kingdom but instead disappeared before onica was born though that didnt stop onica from reaserching her and as it turned out she ended up being onica's role model
bluey was banished before onica was brought to live at the castle, he had betrayed the kingdom even in her home part of world the ocean palace arinarcea( which she lived in at the time,) he caused destruction and onica had been too young to inherit the crown of arinarcea so she couldnt chose her own path, meaning she wasnt old enough to fight and stop him.
black was banished when onica was 6 years old  and she witnessed it with her own eyes and sadly she was glad it was done at the time she hadn’t been able to do anything to stop him cause he was of course older than her making him next in line , and she was still too young to fight.
Red was banished when onica was 9  he had been possessed and noone could separated him from the demon. Onica missed him terribly they had gotten along great she often hung out with him and silver and it was very rare you would see on without the other two.
The last  one silver had been banished just 3 years ago he was banished so grey wouldn’t be what this meant is this grey had given some information about his family to carona who was disguised as Annie her younger sister and onica’s difblood   twin, the child had been 3 then and had a problem with being over friendly. But even as young as he was he was going to be banished because of the chosen ones stupid rules so silver told them he made grey do it, just so he wouldn’t lose his little brother, onica had been on  a week long fieldtrip and hadn’t been informed about anything about this subject so she hadn’t been their to help her younger cousins out. Ever since then grey had become a lot more serious and quiet to everyone but onica and Whitney ever since then he had never gone back to the death room and the only people he trusted were onica and whitney.) onica? whispered grey, (as the trio walked home from school later) where are we going to find someone to help us? I don’t know whispered onica quietly but Im going to find out.Suddenly  the onica stopped  and stopped the others “what is it?” whispered Whitney “do you hear something?” “yes.” onica answered. “run now!” the three ran forward as fast as the could suddenly onica said into the cave I can block the entrance so they cant get us the others nodded and followed her lead when they were all in onica closed the cave off with her ice bending.  we can escape through there she said pointing to another opening where an icy blockade was melting away they nodded and followed just then they noticed something something that noticed them as well.
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Meanwhile Miles had woken up and noticed he was in the hospital he got up and walked over to the middle of the room where a bookshelf was he chose a book he guessed onica would surely like he opened it and pretended to read but was really trying to recall the memories of the day before so he could remember why he was in the hospital he finaly remembered the attack he tried to remember what sonar and eric where talking about but couldn’t but the he rememberd something he hadn’t yesterday he had lost one of his 2 tape recorders he usually used to record people talking then mix and match it with something he had recorded a while ago on the other he wondered that if by some  chance it was in the backpack he always wore. He looked around until he found it on the ground under his bed. He looked in and just as he expected it was there recording everything still.he closed his bag just as the doctor came in Latter as he walked out of the hospital he knew what he had to do, show the tape to one of the castle guards .
©2008-2009 ~legendary444
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the pics not mine .... not quite sure where it came from but the story is all my creation. if someones willing id want to hold a contest (since im not able to draw very well on the computor and can only do color overs) if anyone tries the have to draw eather whitey,grey,silver if u want,miles or of course onica the rules onica has blonde hair blue eyes and would not be caught wearing a dress even if her life depended on it skirts and kimonos r fine she has a locket u can design however u like grey, whitey,and silver, all look somewhat like bakura if u watch yugioh u should know who i mean dont make the boys very muscular i would die from it creeping me out... (oh yea its the good bakura some people consider him and his evil milenium items spirit the same person) and miles rules are just make him a cute blondy not to muscualar... at all but is very skiny he also has blonde eyes. k oh by the way when i upload the third chapter there will be anothe charecter choice tsunamii
she could eaither have blonde hair or black if u make her blond u will have to make her as a child because she used to have blonde hair but it turned black when she was about 19 ill say anyways she has a staff u can design its the staff of time she also has a scythe if i spelled that right
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