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it was a cold and rainy day as it usually was in samaria but this day was different screams of agony  and hatred in the air the only beings 2  
be seen were a woman and a baby in her arms running away with fear in there eyes suddenly a explosion was heard and confirmed the woman’s fear  
her sister was dead.. right then she promised herself she would never let anyone harm her little niece as she leapt trough a portal to safety
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Onica wake up!!!!!!!!! Yelled a voice. Aw man let me sleep whined Onica to her younger cousin come-on get up!!!! Her cousin whined again   Alright Grey I’m up I’m up...
Her cousin ... his name was Gregory but hardly anyone remembered anymore because he was born with Grey hair he had been nicknamed
Greystar   what’s with the star part no one really knows anymore because he went with Grey for so long.
Onica enjoyed sleeping in  but that dream had been bothering many people lately and her cousin felt it his job to wake her up in her minute of "terror" even though she  told him time and time again that it wouldn’t help matters
so Grey how is whitey doing today did she die of  boredom yet? .... {The question was always used in the mornings since whitey (or how shed rather be called Whitney, since it was her real name) could always be found studying the facts about there home planet the chosen one, the planet or rather the group of planets was named the chosen one because of its rulers and ancient founders having set rules for its super human citizens they all had been commanded to help the other super natural planets in which dangers lay. they were  trained since they turned 10 (the magical age where they usually developed powers.) }That’s kind of why i needed to wake u up this time he whispered today’s her birthday right?. Well she isn’t able to command any of the elements he whispered she might not have any powers and if that’s the case u know what happens...
.oh my gosh  not whitey !! Yelled onica . yea we have to do somthing!!! Yelled Grey   your the next in line for the crown.... onica they’ll kill her !!!!!
the rule about having no powers is cruel onica knew, any person with out them were eaither killed or banished either way they were never seen again .... onica couldent believe it her own cousin the one who never missed a mark in school the one who dreamed of ruling, her own cousin might get killed she had to stop this she zapped her next outfit on and ran to the training room as fast as she could but right before she touched the doorknob she was nocked 2 the ground .
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Sorry are you okay? it was just miles her best friend yea she mumbled. hey she mumbled is it true whitey might be a no blood? ....  Unfortunately yea she might be. he whispered but she’s not in there. he mumbled what?!!! yea she’s already in the death room . gosh not there !!
{the death room onicas name for the room where punishments and banishings took place .} Yea he mumbled. We better hurry up if we want to do anything about it mumbled grey who had finally caught up to onica ... hey miles he mumbled are u gonna come ? no sorry he mumbled I got to help out... Eric. He mumbled onica’s boyfriends name in disgust onica nodded and ran off apparently not noticing the tone of her friends voice.
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as he watched his friend run off he wondered why he hadnt asked her out when he had the chance before she started dating Eric he knew though or thought he knew anyway onica only ever thought of him as a friend he also knew she was really popular with guys as eric was with girls but that was natural with onica being a princess and eric being one of the most powerful steel benders of the kids of their age, either way he knew that it was a fat chance she’d like an orphan like him. As he walked into the training room and walked towards where Eric (or the devil in his mind) had been  to hand the note he had been sent to get to him he noticed something Eric seemed to be talking to someone he stood against the wall and took a peek,  he couldn’t believe what he was seeing  Eric was making some kind of deal with sonar one of onica’s sister sonar who had tried to kill her about 900 times in the past and who had been unsuccessfully banished about 90 times in the past. She was one of the most hated and most powerful enemies the chosen one had to deal with. Just then he heard someone behind him whisper, so miles right?... well prepare for death!!!! As he turned around one of the last things he saw before getting knocked out cold was carona, sonar’s partner and also her difblood twin, the name for someone’s identical twin who was born from a different family.
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okay people thats the end of chapter 1 ill be starting on the next one soon